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Incandescent thoughts implode in other
Rooms, where the lights have all long since burnt out.
Inspiration is constantly smothered
In carpet laced with broken glass and doubt.

The red light should have given her away:
My darling, dread mistress all too merry.
I knew her face when I entered the fray
But leave I now with sorrows to carry.

And yet perhaps men’s minds are meant to break
In the hands of those with hammers and fate.
Life is, after all, just what you can make.
The light only ever comes on too late.

Glass walls are seen as far too confining,
So long as for you, mistress, I’m pining.
©2008-2009 ~herr-moriarty
:iconherr-moriarty:

Author's Comments

"When the Light Comes on, All Sense Goes out"

This is not something I ever thought I would write.
But Shakespeare has been getting under my skin of late.

For Arjuna.

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:iconcrimsonamatory:
Wow, this is excelent, I love it.

--
-rememberence is only an illusion for the life you think you're living
:iconherr-moriarty:
My most sincere thanks.
I had not expected the response to my work to be so positive (or, for that matter, so swift).

--
Meticulous in every moment, yet
often overlooking the true
realities of everyday life.
Indeed, some identifiable instances
arouse the apathetic artist, but
rarely will reality extend a hand.
The artist trembles before what must
yet be created.
:iconcrimsonamatory:
swift positive comments.....that's what happens when you create wonderful poetry...and when I am up at 1 in the morning :)

--
-rememberence is only an illusion for the life you think you're living
:iconherr-moriarty:
Ah yes, that would explain it. I tend to do my the same when caught in a temporary state of insomnia.

I'm glad I caught your eye.

--
Meticulous in every moment, yet
often overlooking the true
realities of everyday life.
Indeed, some identifiable instances
arouse the apathetic artist, but
rarely will reality extend a hand.
The artist trembles before what must
yet be created.

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